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"Dying"

I feel alone in this world
Like no one cares about me
They don`t know this girl
That girl is only me

They only care about themselves
Only themselves and no one else

Don`t they see that I am dying?
That I am dying on the inside
And crying on the outside?
I am crying for someone`s love
I am dying for my pain to go away

They always laugh at what I wear
Some people go,some people stare
They don`t realize I have feelings too
They don`t realize that I am just like you

Someone needs to understand
I need someone to hold my hand!

Don`t they see that I am dying?
That I am dying on the inside
And crying on the outside?
I am crying for someone`s love
I am dying for my pain to go away

I feel like my world is coming to an end!
I feel like not even God is my friend
I am that hurt,that I don`t believe
That someone believe`s in me!

I think that I am just too hurt
You don`t understand my words
I`ll find someone who understands
I`ll find that someone will hold my hand

Don`t they see that I am dying?
That I am dying on the inside
And crying on the outside?
I am crying for someone`s love
I am dying for my pain to go away

"Torn,Limb From Limb"

I am lying on the ground
Don`t hear a word,don`t hear a sound
I need someone to help me up
I need someone to lift my heart up

I am torn limb from limb
My love cannot begin
I need someone to understand
That I am all alone
I need a hand to hold
Or my heart will turn cold

I feel the fire reaching out to me
I feel it will grab me
I need someone to keep it away
Then that will make my day

I am torn limb from limb
My love cannot begin
I need someone to understand
That I am all alone
I need a hand to hold
Or my heart will turn cold!

I will turn cold,too
I am not like you
I need someone who is like me
Or I will kill myself,see!
My blood is turning cold
Do you really care?
I am melting with fire!
The fire is in my hair!

I am torn limb from limb
My love cannot begin
I need someone to understand
That I am all alone
I need a hand to hold
Or my heart will turn cold
Edité par william_693 le 18/08/2006 à 12:38

omg jaci!! that is beautiful!!! wanna be my songwriter? lol

thanks.i like to write deep songs like that.that`s how i get my moods out.lol yea sure,i`ll write any songs you want!literally!

do i have to pay you?

hm...i`ll take 200 bucks in cash up front,please (-D lol jk no you don`t have to pay me.well,you can pay me with banners!hehe

youve got urslef a deal!!! i will PM you if i figure out a song you could write for me... gosh thanks so much! oh and you will get the credit for writing teh song by the way. Cause i might use it in my band if that is okay with you/

oh really?cool thanks!haha no prob =P here`s another song by me

"Kill Me"

Let me breathe my own air
If you don`t,I won`t like you
If you let me walk down the stairs
I won`t be afraid of you

I take me time with you
But I`m not patient anymore
I said I`m backing off now
And you won`t accept that!

Kill me,let me die
Free me,let me fly
I hate the haters
They play tricks on me
Why can`t you just let me be?
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and you can write the rest hehe i`m still trying to work on a version i can sing,but this version is one you can sing
Edité par william_693 le 23/08/2006 à 17:08

lol taht was good!

whoa! those are soo good jaci!! u've got amazing talents girl!! I can even relate to some of ur songs!!! like the first one...

awww thanks!!!

"Lifeless At Heart"

Together we were meant to be
But apart,we were enemies
Did anyone see us change?
Or even rearrange?

I live a life that`s full of doubt
With a passage-door(on the other side)
I try and try to go and explore
But it always passes me by(passes me by)

I call it the guardian angel
I call it a square,not rectangle!

[Chorus] Even times get worse everyday
There is much more work and less play
I have a reason to live,but what is it?
How can I expect the unexpected?
While I am lifeless at heart

Tell me now,deary,why are there(many delays)
Do you see the light,or did it just drift(away)
Keep your spinning-top protected off(beneath the steeples)
Everyone is here today(everyone has gone)away!

Why do you remember my name?
When you cannot remember(your own game)
Why is there a touch of love beneath the love(between us)
When you sold me off to Jesus!Ohhh

I think of it as something else
Something else other than myself!Ohh

[Chorus] Even times get worse everyday
There is much more work and less play
I have a reason to live,but what is it?
How can I expect the unexpected?
While I am lifeless at heart

I am living time between my feelings
I am drifting off onto the ceiling
One down,two mortals to go
Why is there just cloud and no snow?

What if there was no love to begin with
What if...they are tearing me apart!
What if there is nothing but a myth
What if,they have no joy in their hearts!

[Chorus x2] Even times get worse everyday
There is much more work and less play
I have a reason to live,but what is it?
How can I expect the unexpected?
While I am lifeless at heart

"Travel Air Time"

Torn off into darkness
I stand here alone
Traveled off to midnight
Hanging on the phone

People everywhere they come and go
People everywhere think they know!
But they don`t.Just travel off into the distance
Places full of fear alone!

I try to call you from later to midnight
I tried to warn you from somewhat to early flight!
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i`ll edit it later,but what do you think of it so far?
Edité par william_693 le 23/08/2006 à 17:15

Gosh girl, I'm speechless. I mean, they're brilliant. If you look up talented in the dictionary or encyclopaedia, your picture is next to it. I know, I’ve checked. (-D

awww hehe thanks!!but i doubt you even know what i look like haha but aww thanks!

Yeah, that's quite true, but your name (and pseudo name(-D) were under the picture, soooo.
Edité par Springrose le 23/08/2006 à 21:01

LOL^^^^^^^^ yeh it is rele gd i wish i could wirte like that!

lol awww you guys!!haha thanks

those were good! you write a heck of a lot of songs!

haha yea i do that when i`m bored.and take random pics for my myspace =P

Oh my! Gosh Jaci those songs are beautiful! We've got a recording studio at my school and I record some songs somethimes for my school album. Yeah it's fun! You should try too!