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here`s a song i just wrote.hope you like it
I take it,you left me drowing In your tears of memories You look good,you look bad You took everything that I had Now I close my eyes and then I Sail off to the ocean of tears I will not wait for you Not even a million years! I take it,you hate me now! I take it,you left me to the ground I don`t need you to have a life I don`t need you more than any fight You kept me drowning in those tears You kept me hating a million years! You look so good,you look so bad Now go on,get out,cuz I think I`m glad! I take it,you were still crying I take it,you were even dying You see,boy,you made all your choices Now see this,I have a million voices! I take it,you took me from my family I take it,you became so happy You thought you could ruin my life Well nice try,nice try,but now say goodbye! I take it,you hate me now! I take it,you left me to the ground I don`t need you to have a life I don`t need you more than any fight You kept me drowning in those tears You kept me hating a million years! You look so good,you look so bad Now go on,get out,cuz I think I`m glad! I take it,you now want me back I take it,you want those burdens off your back You see,boy,I don`t want you So goodbye,for good,I taking back my world! I take it,you hate me now! I take it,you left me to the ground I don`t need you to have a life I don`t need you more than any fight You kept me drowning in those tears You kept me hating a million years! You look so good,you look so bad Now go on,get out,cuz I think I`m glad! on the edge of seventeen... |
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wow jaci that is rele gd!!!!!!!!!! scratch that it was brill!
Edité par cheeky_monkey01 le 16/08/2006 à 13:01 |
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haha thanks!!i wrote it like 8 hours before i posted the topic and i still remembered it lol but still,thanks!
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another song i wrote,and this is how i feel right now
I took the locket you gave me I wore it around my neck I went over to your house And heard you got in a wreck Why would this happen to you? Is this something old or new? And this is how I feel... I don`t feel sorry for you! Cause I read your journal You have always hated me Never said a word to me And I think that I am over you Yeah,over you. I walked back to my house There you stood,outside I ran up to you and gave you The picture the locket had inside And I threw the locket to the ground Stomped on it and threw you out! And this is how I feel... I don`t feel sorry for you! Cause I read your journal You have always hated me Never said a word to me And I think that I am over you Yeah,over you. I don`t feel sorry for you You hate me,now I hate you Is this how your plan is supposd to be? I don`t see anybody else in the room... But me!Yeah,yeah,yeah,only me! Ohhh...I hate you! And this is how I feel... I don`t feel sorry for you! Cause I read your journal You have always hated me Never said a word to me And I now know that I am over you. Totally over you on the edge of seventeen... |
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hello???what do you think???lol
on the edge of seventeen... |
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great job jace! (my nickname for you: jace!)
"blessed are those who have not seen and yet have believed" |
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haha thanks cg!
lol luv the nickname for me =P ooh that rhymes! on the edge of seventeen... |