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Me and my sister Ashlee have made up a poem about the stone table, so here it is.....

The Stone Table
The moon was cruel and crimson red,
The Lion exhales as he stares
Into the black and empty eyes
And hears the evil peircing cries.

His padded feet that made no noise,
Now feel the cold of rugged stone.
The enemy knows not its defeat,
In false knowledge they bind and beat.

The One who holds the Silver Knife,
Calls to the creatures, "Bring Him here."
They drag the Shaved up carved stairs,
The King of Glory, disgrace to bear.

The deceitful figure, on her knees,
The wicked shape of death revealed.
The Evil One then cites her hate,
And drops the Knife- the Lion's fate.

The Great Cat lies dead, lifeless in solitude,
The Deep Magic waiting to enter its place.
The Stone Table cracks, death overturns,
The Magic appeased, King of Glory returns.

The blood now is gone, the stab wound has healed,
His mane of gold now has returned.
The Table did crack, for His life He did give,
Aslan's returned, the traitor may live!

Please dont take this poem for your public use including xangas and my spaces please. For personal use only.

Sooo... what do you think?

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oh,that was sooo cool!you should make one about Will!but still,sooo cool!lol

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okay, this is ashlee, other composer... thanks! i could make one about will, give me ideas.

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yeah its great.......yeah one about will
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that poem's awesome

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yea,please make one about will,ashlee!i dont have any ideas for it except it has hott,gorgeous William Moseley in it!!!!sorry,but im in obsess-crazy mode right now and i cant control it!!!!!

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that was brilliant lots of details.

im down with that.
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that was great. i don't have any ideas though about the william poem.

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well,how about his sparkling eyes in the william poem,his soft and flowy hair,and his gorgeous face?!?!?!totally most of the details we need!!!!oh and the last details,his heavenly name!!!William Thomas Moseley!!!!!!!!!

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hey, what about his personality? i mean read the latest interview.

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oh yea that too!i read it already.sorry,but i forgot.yeesh im not perfect

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i didn't mean to sound mean i just meant that his personality has a lot to do with me liking him

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yea i know.sorry if i was mean,too

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don't worry about it. you weren't

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im obsess crazy right now.wanna join me?lol

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heck yeah!

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i wanna join too
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yea i know!im obsessing with a friend on the phone and she's like,'OMG he is hott!!!!!!'

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ok say something that i can obsess about.

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obviously he's HOT

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