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okay, so what do you guys think about the poem? I am thinking of putting it into a competition or something. I will try and make a poem about will, but i am pretty sure it will suck brick. (as my sister would say)
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LOL! it's worth a try.
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Okay, my sis made one, but she didn;t put it up yet, but i will try and get her to. It's pretty good.
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This poem SUCKS BRICK! but you asked for it, so here goes.....
Stroking your perfect dirt-blonde hair, Staring into sea blue eyes, I thinnk of all the times we've shared The times we've laughed, the times we've cried. The times we'd thought it'd never fly, The times we both were heavy laden. We shared our burdens, left all behind. The arguments and fights have faded. Now all I think about is you. Your strength, your eyes, your love for tea. I'm trapped in love, nothing to do, But think how big our love will be We need not act (though that's your passion) We need to express what we really feel, Let's love eachother like its goin' out of fashion Have passion unbreakable, hearts of steel. Let's sit on the front porch swing, Eating tuna and mayonnaise on wheat While I lay my head upon your shoulder And listen to your voice so sweet. Then when I lay in bed at night, Gazing at your peaceful eyes I'll wonder how this man could be From anywhere but Paradise. Thanks to all of you who took time to waste your lives on reading this poem. You can't blame me though, I wrote it at 11:00 at night. <a href="http://tinypic.com"><img src="http://i8.tinypic.com/24fzeyh.jpg" border="0" alt="Image and video hosting by TinyPic"></a> |
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thats really good!!! way better than i would have done ( if i wrote anything!)
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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That was REALLY good!!! I luved it, bettter than i could do.
 
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that was AWESOME. no lie
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you gals really think so? I thought it suckt. but if you like it, i guess i did well!
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yes its really gooodd
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i loved it.
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u guys should definatly make more.
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yeah definately
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we were going to today, but we got distracted. we will prolly have more for u guys this week.
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omg sorry if this is mean,but i was laughing at the out of fashion and tuna and mayo on wheat thing!sorry,its just sorta funny.but its a really good poem!mine wouldve sucked brick!lol
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yeah as i said, 11:00 at night! lol. thanks
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hey people i am going to post a poem o here if i have time to make one after i finish my scarf today!
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ok. i can't wait!
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my sis says she will get right on it. hehe.
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Hey people i made one up! Its really short, but my brain was stuck today. It goes like this.
His accent, voice and hoxy bod, I sware that smile is sent by God! He loves his tuna, loves his tea, A very lovely Brit, you see. His charming face lights up my day, My sunshine when my mood is gray.. He floods my mind, flocks my soul, He's my obsession, in the whole! TADA! <a href="http://tinypic.com"><img src="http://i8.tinypic.com/24fzeyh.jpg" border="0" alt="Image and video hosting by TinyPic"></a> |
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THAT ONE!! IT IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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