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LOL!! short and sweet!!

ROFL!! i am serioulsy laughing a lot righ tnow~!

i saw him
he saw me
we loved each other
the end!


that's how my story would sound (there's a reason i don't write stories )

lol the i'm the same LOL^^^^^^^^^

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(sorry bout that if i offended anyone) WILL4EVER YOU ARE ABSOULUTELY AMAZING!!!!!!! A FALLEN GODESS INDEED!!!! this is the kind of story i have wanted to read for a long time!!! WRITE MORE ITS BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u girlies crack me up!! LMBO!!
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and here is the nxt chapter


Peter:

We had the whole first song entirely to ourselves. I felt all eyes on us, but it didn’t matter. I tried to calm my nerves and pounding heart- I failed. I just got lost looking into her brown eyes the moment I rested my hand on her slim waist and her hand fitted perfectly into mine. After the song ended, a young man asked her to dance, she surprisingly accepted. I felt like yelling in his face and jealousy flushed my face. I walked over to Lucy and danced with her, so I didn’t feel lonely and without a partner. As I spun her around, she giggled lightly, pleading me to spin her more.

I saw that Edmund had asked that Gena girl to dance, in one of her hands; she was holding one of the orchids he had given her. They seemed to be content as they gazed into eachother’s eyes.

As the song ended, I quickly asked Elizabeth to come and follow me. She accepted.

‘Now, close your eyes- I don’t want to ruin the surprise.” I said in a calming voice.

“Ok, High King Peter, as long as you never lead me astray” she said smiling- her eyes closed.

“How could I do such a cruel thing?” I asked, pretending to be hurt

“Oh, I don’t know- it just seems like your kind of nature” she said lightly laughing to herself.

I led her down the hall and into an opening closed off by a red silk curtain. I pushed by the silk to find us outside on a balcony.
She slowly opened up her eyes and was in awe of the star sprinkled heavens above. The moon radiating beauty off her face. She walked over to the railing and held on to it gazing upwards. I looked at her as she looked up and was reminded that she looked like a fallen angel- she was so attractive.

“Thank-you for all that you have given me, I am forever grateful.” Her circlet shone in the mystical moonlight.

“Your welcome, it was my pleasure!! I enjoy your company”

Sounds were muffled but I heard the music start up again.

“May I have this dance?” She didn’t reply. She simply stepped closer and intertwined her hand into mine. I was reminded how much we looked perfect for each other- her small hand fitting into my larger one. I placed my hand on her waist and pulled her closer to me. I could feel her warm breath collide with mine. We danced in sync to the song and she eventually rested her head on my shoulder.

I noticed her necklace and how alluring it was.

“That is a magnificent necklace- it is worthy of a goddess.”

“It was my sister’s” she said with emotion.

“Elizabeth, I‘m sorry- What happened?” I felt a pit in my stomach from already guessing the answer.

“She died two years ago along with my mother and father. As a Minotaur dragged her away, she tossed me a wooden box with the necklace inside of it.” She was silently crying and looked down at the floor, trying not to let her emotions show. I lifted her chin up and used my fingers to wipe the tears away.

“I’m so sorry; I can’t imagine how hard it must have been to go through such a grieving time”

She just looked up at me and said “Thank-you for making this a magical night.”

We danced until the last song ended. I leaned down and whispered “Happy Birthday Elizabeth”. I pulled away and left looking back at her delicate figure standing in the moonlight.

Elizabeth:

His last words to me that night were “Happy Birthday Elizabeth”. He pulled away and disappeared into the silk curtain walking back into the ballroom. I still had a few goose bumps- partially from the cold but mostly where his breath had tickled my skin. The entire night I had butterflies flying in my stomach. I realized how I felt toward Peter. I only knew him for a day but it felt like a lifetime. I decided to go back now. Almost everyone had left. My gaze fell upon a girl with a light blue dress, sitting down.

“Gena, did you enjoy the banquet” I said as I walked over to her.

“Thanks to you- I had an extraordinary time” she looked down at her bouquet of pale orchids and I smiled at her.
“And, I see that Peter and you also had a good time, making a disappearing act and all” Gena said. “What did you guys do??”

“Sorry, I didn’t mean to create a stir. He took me out to the balcony to dance privately. How was Edmund?”

“Oooh, Liz, he was charming!!! He told me that he would like to see me again tomorrow Liz!! TOMORROW!!”

“Cool, why don’t we head back to our room?”

We got into our nightgowns and got into our beds. We both had the best dreams in ages.

Elizabeth:

For the last week or so, I have been getting to know the Pevensies better- especially Peter. Gena and Edmund seem to be getting closer too. They seem to pull a disappearing act of their own and magically reappear later. Everyday, Gena and I try to go the practice fields. We improved our skills in sword fighting and archery. Gena could shoot her arrows almost as good as Susan and I was an excellent swordswoman. The centaurs only teach boys but made an exception when they heard how good we were. Both the men and centaurs taught us maneuvers, fighting tactics and new steps which helped us a great deal. Gena and Susan held archery competitions to better themselves and I could disarm the whole army except for the centaurs. I was so good, that I could defeat Edmund a few times. I would never duel Peter for some strange reason- I don’t know why.

Every night, I would go up into Lucy’s room and meet Susan there too and sing songs of different varieties. Lucy always begged me to sing “Lion”. It was hard at first because my mother used to sing it to me before I went asleep. Both Susan and Lucy told me I had a voice like an enchanting nymph. Peter would wait outside the door and listen to me sing. When I finished, he would pretend to just have walked in.

‘Lucy, it’s time to go to bed now”

“Peter, oh can’t she just sing one more song?? Please?”

“No, it’s getting late, tomorrow though”

And with that, Peter tucked Lucy in and kissed her good night. Susan and I would go out into the hallway and wait for Peter.

“Goodnight you guys. I’m going to bed but you two can stay up if you want” Susan said sleepily.

“Thanks for permission but we are old enough to take care of ourselves. Good night Susan” Peter said.

“Hey, why don’t we have a race” I proclaimed.

“To the kitchen. Loser has to make a food that the other person has never had before.” Peter insisted.

“You’re on!!!”

“On your mark-…..HEY WAIT!!!!”

Peter never finished because I just started running. I was running as fast as I could down a long flight of stairs. Peter was till behind me. Good. I turned a sharp left, than a sharp right. All of the sudden, we were neck and neck. Down another flight of stairs and straight down the hallway. Right before I reached the door, Peter picked up speed and ran past me toward the mahogany door. He quickly opened it, ran inside and shut the down in my face. I slowed to a halt before I had an encounter with the door. On the other side, Peter said “Ha!! I won, the LOSER makes me food!” in a matter-of-fact yet hearty voice.
He opened up the door and let me in- his breath still staggered from running. I was mesmerized by the way his chest was going up and down. When he breathed in- his tunic was tight against his muscular chest. I smiled and laughed. I asked what kind of food he wanted.

Peter:

I opened up the thick door to let her in. I was starving from running so fast. I caught her looking down at my chest, mesmerized by my breathing pattern. She suddenly stopped and smiled. Her hair was wild and wavy- I wanted to pet it like a puppy. I told her that I was willing to try something new.

“How about you try random surprise.”

‘I’m scared!!! Please, the last thing I want to do is die!! I put on a fake horrified look that made her crack up.

“I know just the thing to do just that” she said smirking. She melted cheese and added salsa. When it was done cooking, she pulled out a bag of tortilla chips. She dipped a chip in the orange and yellow chunky mixture and ate it with a loud crunch. I followed her example and fell in love with the mixture. It was balanced with just enough cheese and salsa to taste both. The aftertaste had a little kick to it.

“Your concoction is delicious” I said

“I can tell because you got it all over your shirt” Elizabeth said bursting with laughter, pointing at my shirt with her finger.

We both were getting full, so we decided to call it a night. We washed our hands and I walked Elizabeth to the staircase, which led up to my bedroom.

“Goodnight, Elizabeth. The service was excellent. Compliments to the chef.”

“Goodnight Peter. Sweet dreams- I’ll see you tomorrow.” I watched her walk down the hallway until I couldn’t see her anymore. I replayed what just happened and it made me content. I walked into my bedroom and had the sweetest dreams I have had in a long time.



u can listen to 'Lion' by Rebecca St, James here:

http://www.narniafans.com/movies/mov_st.php

u scroll down and she is the person right before the dude w/ blonde spiked hair...

Edité par will4ever le 31/05/2006 à 21:35

awsomeness!!!

i cant believe i am saying this sooo early but if i dont get many more comments..i might pull this story


anywho....

Now- things get interesting. Today, we get to meet DUN-DUn Dun……Victoria.
I tried to save you guys the pain but I couldn’t resist!! LoL.

The Coming:

Victoria:

Finally, after a long journey from the Valley of Aphrodite, my carriage arrives at the gate of Cair Paravel. Across from me was my lady waiting; Sara. Driving the coach was Kyle. He had blue eyes, jet-black hair and a tan skin tone. A valiant Elvin guard stood watch at the gate. When he found out that I, Victoria the Princess of the Valley of Aphrodite had arrived, he opened the gate immediately and swiftly. When we arrive at the grand Entrance, Kyle kindly lets Sara and I out of the carriage. The sun shines on my fair complexion, ugh, I should have known to have worn a veil to protect my face. I walked toward the giant doors before me and two centaurs on either side opened them with great force. I stepped into the Great Hall- it felt like my home already. Maids were cleaning and dusting frantically. One figure at the far end of the hall indeed didn’t look like a servant. He wore a black tunic lined with silver. He had dark features and was smiling at a girl with blonde hair. My eyes shone like fire; thinking to myself ‘why now? I won’t let it happen to me again’. He looked up with a startled expression from hearing my footsteps.

“Welcome to Cair Paravel. Who might you be, my lady?” he said.

“I am Princess Victoria of the Valley of Aphrodite. Are you High King Peter?” I asked with some tension in my voice.

“No, I am King Edmund, High King Peter’s brother. Welcome Princess Victoria. What pleasure do we owe you on this fine day?” he stated with a polite bow.

“Well, I thought that it would be nice to be able to meet the royal family and become acquainted with them” I said under my breath- I come here to meet my future husband. Edmund couldn’t hear me, so I said it anyway.

“Why yes. Take a seat here while I have them come down to greet you.” With that, Edmund motioned for me to sit down I a nearby chair. “Is there anything I could get you?”

“Well, my journey was long and gruesome. I would like some ice cold water.” He told the girl with blonde hair to fetch Peter, while he asked the other servants to get Queen Lucy and Susan. He, himself surprisingly went to get the water, leaving me by myself. I pulled my dress down to reveal a little cleavage. I hoped to make a good impression on my future husband. I couldn’t wait. I snickered knowing that I would get what I came here for.

Gena:

The moment she walked in, I knew she had trouble written all over her. I once read in a book that the Princess of the Valley of Aphrodite was also Princess of the Dark. With that title, she could control and receive whatever she wanted and was blessed with ever-lasting beauty. She was average height with sparkling blue eyes, a fair complexion and straight dirty blonde hair. Inside, she had a heart of cold, black stone- and she knew it. To her, inner beauty was far more important but, ‘tis is not the case with every man. I hated her guts. Edmund seemed to be caught in her trap of beauty temporarily. He is a smart boy and I believe he feels the way I do about her.

I knocked on Peter’s door. When he didn’t answer, I walked in to find no human presence other than me. Probably out with Liz. I checked the kitchen, gardens and even the balcony. No Peter. He must be at the practice fields or river with Liz. I didn’t feel like hurting my legs by walking down the long paths so I joined the other servants in the Great Hall. Susan gave me a quizzical and confused look and I returned the favor.

Victoria:

It only took a moment for King Edmund to retrieve my water. It was indeed ice cold- like my heart. A few minutes later, Queens Susan and Lucy walked in, followed by the servants. The one sent to get Peter had returned without him.
“Sorry, Edmund but I couldn’t find him” she said innocently.

“It is alright Gena, you tried your best. He is probably out.”

I was surprisingly patient to meet him. I knew that our paths would meet soon. I could sense it. If he was the Peter I had heard about, than he would throw a feast in my honor. Queen Lucy and Susan introduced themselves. I was by far the fairest and prettiest if both of them. Just then, two people walked in with a cheerful aura about them. I automatically knew that the man was High King Peter. He was tall and extremely handsome with light blue eyes and full pink lips. His smooth blonde hair was swept the left side of his face. Just one minor-no, major problem, the girl had her arm wrapped around his. I knew that I was too late and it killed me inside.

She was small and delicate with a tanned, sun kissed complexion. She had wavy brown hair and chocolate brown eyes with rosy cheeks. In her free hand, she held a small bunch of wildflowers. Fury and anger boiled inside of me but, I contained myself.

“King Peter emerging from the unknown” Edmund said in a light-hearted way. “This is Princess Victoria of the Valley of Aphrodite.”

“Hello, princess. As you know, I am High King Peter.” He extended his soft hand and I took it and did a graceful curtsy.

“Your majesty, sorry for such short notice of my visit but I hope that you still have a room that is available.”

“Why, there is always room for company” said Peter graciously.

“Who is your friend?” I said coldly.

“This is Elizabeth.” He looked down at her, revealing a loving and truly sincere smile. She curtsied with such poise as she said “It is a pleasure to meet you, your highness.” She had a dazzling smile, which made me look bad. I wouldn’t allow it.

“Is she a servant?” I asked coolly, already knowing the answer from looking at her tan servant clothes.

“Uh, well, um..yes, she is” Peter said, his smile wavering. The girl didn’t mind. She kept smiling back at me with such intensity as before. I unfortunately wasn’t messing with some dumb servant girl. This made me extremely mad. I was screaming inside of my skull.




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sweetness!! awsome story!!!!

it is incredible! i can't wait to hear the rest

*of course i haven't read the story on another board and know what's going to happen*

huh??

go back to sleep BK, it doesn't matter! it's between me and will4ever!

nighty night!

yeah dw...its nothing..inside j/k

anywho...im shooting to get 5 comments so plz make tht possible chakitas

if not...this story MAY be done for..idk

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

DON'T STOP IT! IF NO ONE READS IT I WILL (even though i already have) OH WELL! I WILL STILL SUPPORT YOU ANY WHO!

sorry guys!!

no i shall not go back to sleep!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!(evil laugh)

OOH and SPAMMING DOES NOT COUNT!!

nice try CG...i know u mean good but....yeah...srry


but thnx soo much for supportin'

anyways, great story!!

SPAMMIN'?

YEAH YOUR WELCOME!

thnx BK- i shall grant u with this nummy cookie!


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ok CG:: spamming is when u get side-tracked and say totally useless stuff....like constant smilies for a reply...

but its ok...ill make an exception for u 2...lol
but its really ok..d/w i was j/k
Edité par will4ever le 02/06/2006 à 01:16