Pyxidis.fr, faites parler vos passions !

exactly...ur like spot on! ^^^

thanks u!

hah...
yeah i lovce this story.. i just cant get over it!@

im gonna have to read it over again when its all put together!!!!!!!!!!!

ok..ill send it to ya when its all done or when i have time...

have you written the end yet?

yeah i finished it already on williammoseleyfan.net

omgsh! r u serious!
i so have to read it!
brb!

SO SERIOUS!
no lie
haha ok then

hey can you send it to me as well?

the whole thing??
sure! as long as you dont run off with it

that was so good!

a perfect ending!

haha dont tell everyone though...lol
^^ i trust tht u wont!

No, just the end taht i havenst seen since i cant get on williammoseleyfan.net...
OMGosh i would never run off with it!

i won't!

haha i trust u guys!!

ok....ill send it to ya ashlee- just remind me too!

^^ thanx!

well anywho...thnx again for the millionth time for the support!


This chappie might be PG-13 cuz of violence. Don’t say I didn’t warn you….

Elizabeth:

The hillside was absolutely beautiful. The light breeze blew the wildflowers softly. Exotic birds flying by sung their song of life. In the distance, the river glistened in the welcoming sunlight. The whole scenery was surreal. Edmund started running down the hill at full speed. Soon, everyone caught on and was racing down the hill laughing merrily and feeling pumped. The two maple trees on either side of the path signified the finish line. Lucy surprisingly was in first place. Maybe it was because of her youthful source of energy. Victoria and I were neck to neck. Faster we would run only to find ourselves still tied for third (Edmund was in second). Victoria would unnoticeably nudge me or hit me in hopes of tripping me. I was absolutely appalled so I just returned the favor. I was a few yards away from the two marker trees. I gunned it and passed Edmund and Lucy- leaving Victoria to eat my dust! I jumped in delight to find that I won the race. It was silly but it meant that I was no feeble servant girl in Victoria’s eyes.

Everyone came over to briefly congratulate me on my small victory. Peter declared that we should continue on our way to the practice fields. There was a tent set up for us just in case we had to get dressed privately. I went inside the tent briefly to put on some protective armor.

“C’mon Elizabeth…..get ready to fight me!!” Edmund said quite triumphantly.

“Ohhhh! I’m shaking in my shoes because I’m so scared!” I said sarcastically.

I drew the sword that Peter had given me. We started off with the tips of our swords touching. Our swords clashed aggressively, little sparks flying. I swerved my sword to the right. Edmund intelligently blocked me. Our footwork was light, but the intensity was high. I kept my eyes on my sword and alternating to Edmund slyly. Edmund would grunt here and there out of desperation of coming close to unarming me- but never did he once. Our audience kept cheering us on and mocking us jokingly- everyone except for Victoria.

“Ohh Edmund- you wouldn’t want to lose to a girl now?” Peter said sarcastically.

“No!! I can feel the winds of change signaling my future victory!” Edmund said determined with sweat dripping from his brow and a focused glare in his eyes.

I aggressively knocked his sword out of his hands. It went flying in the air. Edmund sulked in defeat. He had actually hoped to defeat me this time, but I wouldn’t let him. Gena cheered for me and comforted Edmund at the same time. Peter had eagerly stood up to congratulate me. He walked over and gave me a loving hug. Victoria just sat on the blanket with a obvious pout. She wanted all the glory and attention.

Next to duel was Peter and Edmund. They eagerly equipped themselves with their chosen sword. They started with the tips of their swords touching as well. The clashing of swords rapidly filled your ears. Sparks were flying like fireworks. Peter’s footwork was heavier as he transferred weight between legs. It looked as if they were enemies- their sole aspire to kill each other. But in reality, they were just really into it. Lucy screamed several times “Oh, don’t kill each other!!” out of disbelief. I was nervous that they would seriously get hurt and I think Gena felt the same. Peter swerved his sword to the left, knocking Edmunds sword out of his hand. Edmund was dumbstruck because he had just been beaten twice on one day. I got up and kissed Peter lightly on the cheek to congratulate him. Victoria had fireballs shoot up in her eyes because she was jealous of Peter and me.

“Peter would you like to go on a walk with me in the forest to explore the land??” Victoria said sweetly, eve though I knew she was definitely faking it.

“Sure. It would be my pleasure.” Peter eagerly got up and extended his arm for her to take. I was jealous- I had to admit. Victoria looked back at me to spite me.

Susan could feel the growing tension and said “Well, I guess we will see you in a little bit. Peter, don’t stay out too late.” We all turned around and started walking back up the path.

Victoria:

I snickered at Elizabeth as I took Peter’s arm to go on a pleasant walk. She didn’t look too pleased- exactly what I thought. We traveled along a beaten path towards the emerald forest. It was so full of life and vibrant. I was in awe- which is a rare thing in my life. The sun shone through the leaves, giving them the effect of stained glass. Peter was tense at my touch. It felt as if he thought he was betraying his servant girl just by holding my arm! My arm!

It was time. I would have to make my move now or never. I whispered a spell called Pasión de Afrodita (Aphrodite’s passion).
‘Winds of change hear my plea
Lust and love
Come together as one
This is a dream I am living’
The winds picked up and the sun was rapidly masked by the clouds. Peter’s eyes had now altered into a deep blue- like dusk. They were cold and full of lust at the same time. My planned had worked- my job complete. I glanced and saw a rustling in the bushes. I called over to Peter saying that I was going to pick some wildflowers and would be right back. He said that it was fine and that he would stay there to wait for me. I investigated the bushes and found the source of the noise. It was none other than a spy sent from Aphrodite herself. By the looks of his armor, he was a chief spy of the Valley.

“What do you want??” I said briskly.

“Aphrodite wanted to inform you that time is of the essence. She would like to know how business is.”

“Fine, just fine. Now, go off on your way and never come back!!”

With that, he gave me a confused glance and was on his way slowly at first. I stealthily ran up behind him and drew my sword. I swiftly beheaded him. His body slowly fell to the ground- blood spewing, his head lost in the forest. I took out a piece of paper and wrote a letter to Aphrodite in his blood informing her that everything is going as I had planned it. I found a worthy bird in a low branch and calmed it so I could send my letter. I tied it to its foot and it flew off, obeying my command. Remembering what I had told Peter, I picked a small daisy and returned to where Peter was.

Peter:

She came back with a single daisy. She looked more beautiful than ever before. I had an immediate longing to be with her- it was as if a wave had washed all my other emotions dry. I looked into her crystal blue eyes which were also filled with lust. She came closer to me and started to stroke my chest. I caressed her cheek and leaned in. Our lips met and sealed all space between them. I grabbed the side of her head, my thumb stroking her hair as we kissed passionately. Her arms wrapped around my neck while our kiss got more intense and full of lust and longing to be with each other. I loved this feeling and how it engulfed me.

your welcome for the millionth time!

oh boy!
i relaly dolove this story.... very good... i think you need to publish it only with different characters obviously!