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okay we're starting to not make sense!
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thats normal of me! i meant you funny me too!
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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okay then!!! lol you funny me too lets go on forever!!!
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okay peoples!! i have some poems!! but ill only post one tonight. short on time.
If by MEEEE!!! If your eyes were a raging river, I'd be lost in the depths of the sea. If your love is drops of blood, My heart is full beyond capacity. If your love could have an end, I'd have to walk forever to find it. Not a million ropes, or cords or prisons, Could ever in a lifetime bind it. If your love is crimson paint, My whole world is colored red. If your love could be provisions, Every stomach would be fed. If your looks could ever murder, Your sentence surely would be death. If your love could ever strangle, I wouldn't be allowed a breath. And I cant find an ending to it so i need some helps. <a href="http://tinypic.com"><img src="http://i8.tinypic.com/24fzeyh.jpg" border="0" alt="Image and video hosting by TinyPic"></a> |
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Woah!!! Thats DEEP!!!
me like it! 
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thank you! do you have any ideas for the ending?
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idk, maybe something like:
thats why i .... love u, i don't know, im a cheesy poem writer! <font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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wow i really liked that poem it's deep
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i know, its super deep, i LOVE IT!!!
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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extremely deep. it awesom!!!!
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that's great! you are extremely talented!
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im only good at expository writing and responding to literature, anything but poems!
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same here! i can't write poems to save my life!
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haha! neither can i! And next week in language class we're starting the poetry unit!
 Edité par William_is_Hot le 02/03/2006 à 02:27 <font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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uh-oh! oh well, im sure you will do fine! I really never was interested in poems until i saw will!!!! but i cant write anything but poems, nit stories or anything, i suck brick at those I have another poem i will put on a little later, if you guys arent getting tired of them!
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YAY!!! put it on! hehe..mind if i use one for my poetry book i have to make??? jk!!!
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she says she thinks that u are supposed to make ur own poems. hehe but if you arent you can use one or two or all of them
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i said i was kidding! I wouldn't take hers! I'll go get some from google!
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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we are doing poetry in english class and i am horrible.
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So are we! i have to writre a whole poem book!!!
<font size=1><center></i><font face=verdana>lately ive been wishing i had one desire<br>one that would make me never want another...something that made it so that nothing mattered<br>.all would be clear then. |
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