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ion , on deva
it vo
ir la m
ise en place de l'
alliance avec notemment des personnages tel que Mon Motha. Cec
i semble avo
ir été quelque peu abandonné. On a donc aucune scène avec Mon Motha dans le f
ilm, et Bana Bremu ( ba
i l
ing, G lucas n'ayant pas accepté qu'elle pose nue dans un magaz
ine).c'est également dans cette scène que l'on vo
it padmé dans la tenu qu
i est sur l'aff
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iffure dread(enf
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ir photo en bas
V.O extra
its du Scr
ipt:
81
INT. CORUSCANT-BA
IL ORGANA'S OFF
ICE-DAY
PADME, BA
IL ORGANA, and SENATORS MON MOTHMA, FANG ZAR, TERR TANEEL, and G
IDDEAN DANU s
it
in Senator Organa 's off
ice.
BA
IL ORGANA: Now that he has control of the Jed
i Counc
il, the Chancellor has appo
inted Governors to oversee
all star systems
in the Republ
ic.
FANG ZAR: When d
id th
is happen?
BA
IL ORGANA: The decree was posted th
is morn
ing.
PADME: Do you th
ink he w
ill d
ismantle the Senate?
MON MOTHMA: Why bother? As a pract
ical matter, the Senate no longer ex
ists.
G
IDDEAN DANU: The const
itut
ion
is
in shreds. Amendment after amendment . . . execut
ive d
irect
ives, somet
imes a dozen
in one day.
BA
IL ORGANA: We can't let a thousand years of democracy d
isappear w
ithout a f
ight.
EVERYONE looks at each other, a l
ittle worr
ied at the
impl
icat
ions of what was just sa
id.
TERR TANEEL: What are you suggest
ing?
BA
IL ORGANA:
I apolog
ize.
I d
idn't mean to sound l
ike a Separat
ist.
MON MOTHMA: We are not Separat
ists try
ing to leave the Republ
ic. We are loyal
ists, try
ing to preserve democracy
in the Republ
ic.
BA
IL ORGANA:
It has become
increas
ingly clear to many of us that the Chancellor has become an enemy of democracy.
PADME:
I can't bel
ieve
it has come to th
is! Chancellor Palpat
ine
is one of my oldest adv
isors. He served as my Ambassador when
I was Queen.
GlDDEAN DANU: Senator,
I fear you underest
imate the amount of corrupt
ion that has taken hold
in the Senate.
MON MOTHMA: The Chancellor has played the Senators well. They know where the power l
ies, and they w
ill do whatever
it takes to share
in
it. Palpat
ine has become a d
ictator and we have helped h
im to do
it.
BA
IL ORGANA: We can't s
it around debat
ing any longer, we have dec
ided to do what we can to stop
it. Senator Mon Mothma and
I are putt
ing together an organ
izat
ion . . .
PADME: Say no more. Senator Organa.
I understand. At th
is po
int,
it's better to leave some th
ings unsa
id.
BA
IL ORGANA: Yes.
I agree and we must not d
iscuss th
is w
ith anyone, w
ithout everyone
in th
is group agree
ing.
MON MOTHMA: That means those closest to you . . . even fam
ily ... no one can be told.
They
ALL nod the
ir heads. PADME cons
iders th
is for a moment.
PADME: Agreed.
95
INT. CORUSCANT-PADME'S APARTMENT-DAY
PADME, MON MOTHMA, and f
ive other Senators (BANA BREEMU, FANG ZAR. CH
I EEKWAY, G
IDDEAN DANU, BA
IL ORGANA) s
it
in Padme's l
iv
ing room. C-3PO serves dr
inks to the guests.
PADME: We cannot let th
is turn
into another war.
BA
IL ORGANA: Absolutely, that
is the last th
ing we
want.
MON MOTHMA: We are hop
ing to form an
alliance
in the Senate to stop the Chancellor from further subvert
ing the const
itut
ion, that's
all.
PADME:
I know a Jed
i I feel
it would be w
ise to consult.
BANA BREEMU: That would be dangerous.
MON MOTHMA: We don't know where the Jed
i stand
in
all th
is.
PADME:
I only w
ish to d
iscuss th
is w
ith one . . . one
I trust.
G
iDDEAN DANU: Go
ing aga
inst the Chancellor w
ithout the support of the Jed
i is r
isky.
PADME: The Jed
i aren't any happ
ier w
ith the s
ituat
ion than we are . . .
CH
I EEKWAY: Pat
ience, Senator.
FANG ZAR: We have so many Senators on our s
ide, surely that w
ill pursuade the Chancellor.
BANA BREEMU: When you present the "pet
it
ion of the two thousand" to the Chancellor, th
ings may change.
BA
IL ORGANA: Let us see what we can accompl
ish
in the Senate, before we
include the Jed
i.
PADME takes a deep breath
in frustrat
ion and d
isappo
intment.